Skin Too Deep

Today we received a submission for a TV Pilot entitled “Skin Deep.” The show is about something that has to do with black vs. white and gay vs. straight. Past that we were lost. 

The extended trailer is 10 minutes long and we want all 10 minutes of our life back. 

Here’s your rundown:

  • Too much dialogue for a trailer
  • Not enough backstory
  • Too many things going on at once
  • Sure to cause audience confusion
  • Visual looks dated

On a good note

  • A lot of eye candy
  • Real Issues 
  • Facing Common prejudice so it is a power piece at times 

Take a look and tell us what you all think. 

  

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